Uh lol I didn't actually understand most of this as I don't know what most of the words mean! :-0
But from what I do understand it seems very sad. The first two lines are my favourite, and the last two are so powerful! Sorry I can't say much!
Polly

"mirror mirror...doth thou break with shivers of ecstasy,
or art thou filled with elasticity?"

definately my favorite part of your poem. this was so well written. i loved the old english writing, it was a pleasure to read. it, dare i say, reminded me of shakespeare. [: wonderfully written! 5/5