WOW! That did kind of confused me..but it was brilliant...I have never read a poem like that before, it was unique and very interesting, I would never have been able to do it, I'm not that talented lol..but you did great on it! 5/5

Excellent. Thanks for teaching me a new style. :)

>black&&blue

Wow amazing new style don't think i could pull it off though and well anyways i really liked the poem it was awesome-ness

Wow. That was really great. The whole thing seems so omplicated yet you carried it off brilliantly.

Wow, what a bizarre format. It really worked well in this poem. Very clever, it boggled my mind for a bit. Lol, but then again I'm sometimes slow. Well, can't blame me. It is 8am, and I'm at work. *sigh* Thanks for teaching me a new style. I don't think I'm good at formed poem. I've only done 1, and it was an Acrostic! lol Awesome stuff

Noni --
This was definitely a new kind of poetry! I really liked it, though. I`m considering writing one like it, it really grasped my attention! The flow and the rhyming was really good. Great job! 5/5

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Samantha Hollywood

Very nicely done, Noni. This poem right here is a mouth dropper. I havn't yet tried one of these types, but I'd love too. You've done an excellent job at it. Keep it up, hun. 5/5

Natalie``

Wow.. not only a great poem.. but a teacher too lol.. thanks for the new style! loved this peom, it was confusing, but in a good way, it holds the reader till the end! great!!keep writting! please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks kirsty palmer xx

I could really relate to your poem, nice job!

WOW! My jaw just dropped and stayed open the whole time I read this poem! Great Job! Nicely written and just wow! Good job, hope to read some more. 5/5