The Way I Feel

by samantha   Jul 25, 2006


Pain and sorrow is all i feel
And there is only one way that this could heal
Change your ways like i changed mine
Because i cannot keep pretending that i am fine
When its just me and you, your the sweetest guy ever
But when your with \"your boys\" , you act as if i dont even matter
I would do anything for you
But the real question is would you do anything for me to ?
If you really want to be with me please let me know , and try and make it show
But if you dont then just let me go
I was and am by your side through thick and thin
And i truly love you, thats coming from my heart within
Dont keep me hanging, if in your heart you know im not the one
Because let me tell you heartbreak is not fun

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  • 19 years ago

    by LadyWaszky

    Much better than your first ones, it shows great improvement, it sucked me in more,

    but... it needed some better flow, some parts where there were commas it needed to be a break, also, some spots needed commas.

    also, the language could use more improvement, but you're getting there.

    finally- i have to say i did not like the ending, it just wasn't powerful, at all.

    with some work this could be a kiss ack(lol) poem.

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