Nice work, haven't seen it yet, lol.

Very good wow very hard to say

could you have a look at my poems plz thanx xxx alex xxx

Lol... Great fun to read.. and great toungue twisters in there lol.. 5/5... But nope i havent seen the saw that you have yet to see lol... please could you take a look at some of my poems and comment, thank you... Kirsty Palmer xx

I think this is a great tongue twister!!! good job:):):):)

Thnx guys!!

Lol! gud idea!