Jessssssssssy! I loved this poem so much, especially the last two lines. It's good that you can realize you deserve better and that you shouldnt have to wait around for him. I love youuu! Great work!

--Steph

Nice Poem Defenltly Alot Of Feeling

Jessy!! You're back. We've all missed you so much!!!

But wow, hun. This was a really powerful piece. Nice to see you had some rhyming in there. =P Tehe. It was lovely, and sad at the same time. Keep it up~ 5/5

Natalie``

Great poem. I loved the rhyming scheme. A few lines have more power than others which makes it a bit unbalanced, but the ones that are powerful make the poem great!

Jessy --
Great job! The rhyming and the flow throughout the poem was perfect. I really liked some of the rhymes you chose. The grammar and spelling were good as well ;; no errors at all! The title, as well, was very catchy. I think you did a great job on this. Keep up this wonderful work. 5/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I like this. Sweet and simple. 5/5
-Kakashi

Good job! I liked this one =) It was well written. I liked most of the flow, and the rhymes were good. Excellent job. =) 5/5

Samantha

Great poem! Once again there is no critisism needed here! Beautiful work,

-annmarie

I'm sorry.. This is really sad.. And I'm sorry if this happened to you. It had a wonderful flow, though, and it was a good write.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This is really sad, but yet so touching and I enjoyed reading it, the flow was amazing. Good write.

Wow jessie that was amazing!

absolutely beautiful and had so much emotion.

sophie:) xx