by Pondering Thoughts Of Nothing Jul 25, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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The wind rustles the Autumn leaves |
by sibyllene
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This is good, i'd just fix a couple of typos, like herd=heard, and silence IT bliss= silence IS bliss. i like the repetition you use in some parts, it adds to the feeling |
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Absolutely beatiful, just like ALL of your other poems. |