Nice job with this style....it was good : )

Very nice tiolet. I've done a few of these and found it so hard. But I thought you nailed it. It was flawless. Keep it up!! 5/5

Natalie``

Great poem. I liked the emotion in it, even though it's so short. I didn't know what most of the words meant, but that's ok xD. Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I think you managed to express a lot in such a short poem. Your choice of vocab is great
Excellent job

I love the diction you used in this poem. It seemed so poetic using 'old' language. Awesome stuff.

Very nicely written, my dear! Excellent and gorgeous at the same time.. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

(By the way, I think people are jealous- this shouldn't be anywere near a 4.4...)

Wow great work. you put a lot of emotion into that little bit of poem. i loved it so much! 5/5. wow

Wow..such a powerful poem in only a few lines...well 8 lol.. and i loved this style too, that brought fourth creativity, and also tension..thanks for the new style lol hope to use it sone day! please read and comment on my poems, thank you .. kirsty palmer xx

I think your Triolet was perfect! There really are no other words for me to express I think you did a wonderful job on it!

-AnnMarie