Comments : My gandad-i miss u

  • 19 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    This is sad (of course). How old weew you when he passed?

  • 19 years ago

    by olivia

    13 and thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Moose

    The poem is a great poem. The only thing is that when you use words like "wen" in place of "when" or "u and wt" instead of "you and what" kind of makes the poem a little less appealing to the writer. So maybe just a little bit more editing?