My Hidden Hearts Redemtion

by Sweet MeMoRiEs   Jul 27, 2006


Come with me
into this valley
the drips of rain
will wash away your impurities

skin to earth
nothing between
walking with your feet
against the green

theres one way in
yet quite hard to find
its cleverly concealed
a dillegently built shield

hold my hand
as i guide you through
we can sit under the tree
as i rub my hand against you

feel my hapiness
feel my pain
let me reveal to you
all the i am ashamed

reach out and
touch my caless heart
be my redeemer
please play the part

tell me you love me
let me know its real
break down my wall
help me to feel

the place you go is dark
hard to see and cannot feel
too many have left their mark
and now there is a shield

the illusion
is the shore that surrounds it
but really the whole place
is securely grounded

just covered in my rain
nearly drowning
in all this pain
boat me free

pull the plug
help me heal
let me feel
burry the whole
that ive dug

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh, a very nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by crystal

    Very cool i liek it dont change any thing its perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by kyliecat009

    The ryhming scheme doesnt really work...however the words are very very moving and i can relate!!
    Check out my poems please!
    ~kyliecat009