This is really good, you like to put points in ur writing, i can tell.. you work hard at it, even tho it seems to come easy.. great job and keep writing..

thanx for the comment.. not many ppl read my work =(

xXxkeep it upxXx

This was really good. I loved how you described what people think is weird or bad as a good thing... it really makes people think. thanx for the comment...

5/5

-ARP

So true. We've got to learn to think and say SO WHAT? We can't judge people based on their appearance or values. We have no authority.

5/5

This is a really great message. However the rhyme is brocken in the 3rd and last stanza. I don't know if you ment that. Also in the last stanza "sole" should be "soul". Good job.

I really liked yo poem! it true ppl shouldnt juzt pplz by the way the look or how the drezz or sumthing! i really loved it and i hope u keep writing! i give thiz poem a 5/5 all the way babi!!
much chi~town luv from yo gurl
~!*Peachez*!~
p.s. can u plz comment on my poem, plz and thankz!

Very inspirational poem. It's really very thoughtful. Well done!

This is a great poem, its totally true.. nice

Lovely stuff. Very maturely put, although again let down by a lack of poetic "polish" on the language front. It's a very refreshing read and you can be rightly proud of what you've accomplished here.

Gooooooood i looooooooved it so much check out my new stuff later

I read your comment thanks and this was a wonderful poem.Keep it up!
~Jessica

I got chills wen i read that...lol
that was a really fricken goo poem.
im so glad u wrote it and i got to read it.
that makes me feel a whole lot better bout myself.
well i guess i will let u go.
bye!

Aww. It's sad, but explains a lot. To me, it was saying that people are discriminating others because of what they look like. Which is true. But we shouldn't be racist or awful to one another. We're supposed to get along in this world.

This poem was very well written. =P I liked the rhymes. They were so original, and not used very often. The message was a great one too. =)

[and save somebody's {sole}]
Correction: {soul} You got the wront tense. =P Keep it up, you're a terrific writer. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

WOW!!..well done...the poem is filled with a beautiful message conveyed in a simple and to the point yet Incredible manner!
Kp up de good work!
Easy 5/5!
xxPoojaxx