Strong words here this poem really captured me i liked it :):):)
could you comment on my poems please i like as much feedback as poss thnx xxx alex xxx

For your first, this was excellent... It flowed well and told a good solid story. You also have grat vocabulary, which most don't. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

For your first acrostic this was fantabular!! haha. I reallllly realllly liked this. 1. Because it reminded me of me.
2. Because it was so full of emotion and all. Anddd
3. Because I couldn't pull off an acrostic if my life depended on it.

So yeah, this was...absolutely great. I'm jealous right about now. lol I loved it!!!

[[ Poetess ]]

Woah hun, for your first acrostic, that is amazing. Your words work so well together and i love the last line. A great ending. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more. =]
Tammie xo

'Elloha--

This was pretty good!
I enjoyed it, Liked your vocab alot.
I love acrostics!

Twas well put together & seemed natural, Not forced.
Good for a first!!

Lisaaa.

Wonderful. I have written three acrostics in my life [I think at least...I could be wrong, may have been more] and they are difficult to write, because you have to stick with certain word patterns.

great job! 5/5

What's there to be brutal about. It was good. You are most excellent (but I've told you that before)...

Aya