Comments : Maiden Veil (Monody)

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic poem,great work I love the wording you have used and it flows perfectly throughout , this is def the best poem I have read in a while, def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun Sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    Amazing poem! the words r so deep and full of emotion.

    O, fair darling of the open seas
    Come pure jewel, art with thee

    these lines r so pure... :)