Lovely poem.Your a wonderful writer.

much luv,
Jubilee

Hey!
I like your poem!!
Just on the first line of the second to last stanza it says:

i am going to life my life

I think you meant 2 write

I am going to LIVE my life

Otherwise its GGRRREEEAATT

i like the emotion n message you tryin 2 get across :)

Well done
n Keep writing :)

5/5

Torm
x

Just one little error at the beginning as th eperson above pointed out.. but otehr thn that .. this was a great poem.. it was really good, and flowed lvely.. and was emotional, keep writting, please read and comment on some of mine.. thank you.. Kirsty Palmer xx

I loved your poem, it was so emotional.
it is very b-e-a-utiful!!!

~Ariel~

Really good poem! I like it!