Wow...Another excellent poem. It's kind of sad too. I can tell it's a true story...but if it isn't, then you did an amazing job of making it seem like it was true. 5/5

&& thanks for the comment. All your comments are so nice.

--Shannon--

Aww... wow. this was a fantastic peom, you have great talent, and i could reaaly feel the words being said.. is this a true event? i agree with shannon .. if its not tehn you did a great job! please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks, kirsty palmer xx

Hey.. i agree with them both, it really sounds like a true story.. if it is im sorry that is happening to you.. i hope it all works out. It was a really good poem, i could imagine everything.. you explained it all very well. keep up the great work.
Much love,
Tammie

Omg i love it....hun, i say u really show this to brittany...see what happens...b/c she DOES need to get it together...

Damn,im speechless!!.this is one of my favorite poems...keep writing