Brittni --
Hey! I had to give this poem a 4/5 for a couple of reasons. First of all, the grammar. That is something I check for immediately on almost all poems, especially people who don`t have a lot of comments yet. You need to make sure that you`re capitalizing your 'I'`s, and that you`re using correct puncuation where necessary. The flow was really unsteady and sort of forced. You did an alright job on this, but there is definitely room for improvement. 4/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

The hope of change is very inspiring in this poem. it is virtuous not only to hope but to believe that you can take any steps toward love