WOW
i know this feeling so well
i like the choice of words
it's unique
you should submit more poems it would be great to read more of your poetry
you have a talent keep going
all my love
lorna
xxx

Ur well good at writing

I like it. itz different to anything i have read. love never comes near me so enjoy the chase. *joke*

This poem is really sad. I feel that lover has really turned it's back on you!

Thats good its realy sad and its shows exactually how you feel
xoxroxy

Hey babe this is tina i didnt mean to stop talking to you the other day but my computer messed up. i just saw you on the chat but you left. i hope youre not mad at me cuz i really felt bad. plz dont be mad

Excellent, the beat enetrgy detail..a w e s o m e

lissa