I would like to know... but first I'd like to give my shot at interpretation... it'll be a slightly literal one though.

"Recurring intoxicated visions,
venomous poisoned thoughts.
Unhealed wounds enrich pain,
stomach tied in double knots."

Haunted my memories, to put it simply. What memories? I don't know, I guess I'll have to read on and see.

"Crystallized tears do not shine,
fallen underneath weak eyelids.
Ancient doorways are padlocked,
escaping; evil demons do forbid."

Crying about the memories maybe... being trapped within your mind or thoughts, being unable to escape certain demons, which may either manifest as emotions or (once again) memories.

"Engraved memories stay carved,
beholding those unspoken secrets.
Covering untruthful fake beauty,
lost within these designed portraits."

Perhaps memories of the creation of a facade, or a fake exterior meant to fool people about your true nature.

"Shedding layers of bright colors,
leading towards few false hopes.
Traveling down unseen roads,
climbing up high mountain slopes."

Perhaps trying something new, attempting to recreate yourself into the person you want to be, or just destroying the facade and becoming the person you always was.

"Surroundings are disappearing,
only revealing bitter friendships.
Untold story books closed shut,
locked behind these sealed lips."

Giving up, falling silent. Losing to the memories and the facade.

"..................I just need to cry."
release and ending.

Dunno if that interpretation was too literal.

Wow. I mean...wow. Lol. There's not much else I can say...

You express yourself so well in a poem, but in places, this poem seemed quite dark. Still, it was a great write. Filled with TONS of emotion, which I find is horribly hard for me to do in one single poem. Terrific write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Been there done that. A very nice poem that everyone can relate to. Great write. Loretta 5/5

Wow. this poem is really deep.
you are definetly talented :]

You have used some emotion in this poem.
You are talented at writing!
5\5
It seems to have alot of meaning that i dont fully understand but it is very good.

Kaytie
xxxx

Hey. that a a great poem. its really. deep. but im a little confused...lots of big words...lol.

~Tori Trauma

Wow great peom...

Thats really good...i like it

This was good

Very Nice Poem :) Well Thought Out And Well Made :) Also I Like The Depressive And Real Deep Poems, Well Done And Keep It Up :)

Nicole :) xoxox

Very Nice Poem :) Well Thought Out And Well Made :) Also I Like The Depressive And Real Deep Poems, Well Done And Keep It Up :)

Nicole :) xoxox

WoW thats excellent work

This is very well thought out and written, it IS very powerful, but at some points it strikes me as TOO powerful as an attempt to invoke something, may be a little bit of a stretch. But honestly it is very deep, GOOD JOB!

Gr8 poem. Superb vocabulary. I simply loved it. I guess I have cracked your coded poem thats why I felt like crying when I understood the hidden meaning in this poem.

The words are very hard to understand i think. some of them are.

I can relate to this poem, i loved it. it's hard to find the right words to express your inter feelings, words are powerful..
SO WHAT IS THE MEANING BEHIND THIS POEM.
TONIGHT

I don't normally like when a peom is crammed full of sescription, to avoid just telling the story, and yet, here you have written the deepest of thoughts, the most powerful of lines, one after another, provoking the reader to think, and to feel your pain, and your hurt.. whether it be because of a split, a death, the heartache of a disease, or a trauma, or an illness, it relates, and can be related to.. Therefore, this poem is amazing, and has the ability to anyone who feels the tightness of pian, and the need to let it go.. Very well done. xx

Wonderful imagery, paints a beautiful picture in the mind. Great peice.

Wow this has a lot of emotion and great depth to it.. The ending would usually throw me off and I'd hate it, but it really brought the poem together. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5