Wow i love it. its so real. i agree with amelia. i can relate so much to this poem. so i kno how u feel. great job on writing this. u have talent. so keep on writing i will keep reading. 5/5
take care and stay strong
angie

This was really emotional, my favourite bit was:

Don't try to be my friend,
when you don't like me anyway...

how true!!! great job!

Great poem i can realte loads
5/5

That's a really good i love it
this poem is like a fantasy but so true

Good jop!

Hey fellow Aussie - Love this poem. I have felt this way a number of times. It can hurt