Hell\'s Destiny

by Valisaren   Jul 29, 2006


I sit here thinking of the pastâ?¦and Iâ??m glad it did not last..

Here the shadows comeâ?¦coming to take me homeâ?¦home

To to the depths of hell where I belong and where I fell.

The fire consumes meâ?¦destroys who I used to be. Now

I am nothing but hatred and you are all fated to burn with me

In the great lava sea. donâ??t deny it u know it has to beâ?¦it is

Your destiny. So come forth and take your turn.. Itâ??s your turn to burn.

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  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Another great dark poem Nick, here is a little hint if you want those codes on your poem to go away. Most of the time if you type "He's or don't" stuff like that it will think you are miss spelling it, so go back into your poem and just rewrite the word and it will not make those codes again on that poem. o.o;

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Score i gave you: 5 Like i said there was not a single thing i could fault!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Good points: everything, i totally loved it!! it was like so good! n funny! :D i REALLY liked it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Bad points: NONE!!!!!!!! Iloved it!

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