Hee hee that's great! Is it by chance inspired by the new pirates of the carribean? mmmm Johnny Depp! Well good poem, it made me smile!

Awww that is really cute. It reminds me of kids playing pirates together.

Awwa lieked this poem,... fun to read... very clever how you put it all together, made me laugh... great job! please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks kirsty palmer xx

Jaime Lea --
I think that`s your name? Lol, it`s pretty. So, even if its not, that`s what I`m going to call you. LOL. I`m not really into the 'pirates' thing, but, I can`t really dock you because of my personal interestes. I think that you did a really good job on this, probably the best funny poem on the site. Great job, keep it up!! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Excellent poem...very cute indeed :) 5/5