This poem was really good, it was from a different perspective and really gave the reader something to think about, it was really good.
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Wow-that's breath-taking...It's so well written-the flow is amazing and there is so much emotion in it! Great write-I enjoyed reading =-)

5/5

AMAZING!!im left like speechless..lol.. but yeh the rhyming was good, the flow was perfect!! There was like soo much emotion in it!!
5/5

Wow. I love it. It's very creative. It reminded me of myself, which made it so much more emotionally felt. I could really feel and grip the sadness of the poem.

Very effective poem. It pulls you in well for such a short poem.
'Her fool pain, nobody deserves to share'

Personally I think this would sound better as
Her foolish pain, no one deserves to share.

Lovely poem x

This poem is really good...All i could say was wow! lol It flowed so nicely and the rhyming was perfect....5/5

Wow this was a really deep poem...short but to the point! great write keep it up!