I can really relate to this one. I loved the emotion you put into it, it was really beautiful. I liked your word choice with this write...well done.
You have a lot of talent.
Great job.
5/5
Breanna

A grand write with good description and a strong moral.
I understood and agreed with what you had to say.
It would be interesting and an idea if you were to extend on it a little more, I'd like to read more on this poem if only your willing to share.
Much love and hate.

~Deaths Maiden~