Your style is quite captivating and very profound

I would so read a book filled with poems like this one. Your word choice is flawless. My favorite part was the first two lines. I am now looking forward to reading more of your work.

Love the 'luscious snake' line. very elegant with a hint of eroticism. i haven't figured out how to be as eloquent as this with my more erotic works. very nice. i like your style. excellent poem! 5 for you! -beav

This was provocative and lovely - full of lust and also seemed to be about an old friend... it was very beautiful to read.

*haha - sorry just read Azyo's comment... about wearing a condom... haha

Good poem. Thanks for the read. :)

Mo

I dont know what else to praise about you and your insurpassable abilities in creating art in poetry. I really admire your work and just let me be one of many to say that you are just great. Thanks for the comments in the past, it means alot.

Erotic, exciting and captivating. You never fail to impress me :-)