Wow...loved this poem, really liked your style... well written, keep it up.. please read and comment on some of mine.. thanks kirsty palmer xx

Awww.. this was very sweet and kinda sad.. there were a few grammer mistakes but i think by going over them you can fix that.. the emotion was clear and it really appealed to me.. nice job! 5/5

Wow, this was an acceptional write. i really liked it, especially the ending. great job.5/5
Driver

Awwww.. that was so sad.. the descriptions were good, the flow worked well, and the emotion was clear.. i loved it, nice job! 5/5

I really hvnt read anything like this before and i must say that this is really written very beautifully, every stanza holds a lot of depth in it

all the best and take care

That was an amazing poem girl, keep it up, you'll be a very good poet someday, you love to write and you get your message across to the reader, keep it up and never stop doing what you love

Profound...............

Wow very deep and sad yet good lol great piece

laura