Promise

by DamagedGoods   Jul 31, 2006


You take my hand and make me laugh
youll never be just a guy from my past
when you cuddle me you give make send a shiver down my spine
will i always be yours and will you always be mine

i didnt ever think i could feel so deep
but your the only promise i wish to keep

really short and not that good but i got bored xxxx

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    To forgive is divine. To lose darkness is to shine.

  • 17 years ago

    by SweetSadGuy

    Your poem is already beautiful and a sweet and gentle piece to read. A bit more effort would have made it much better. Plz don't be bored with expressing your heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by the love of another fills my soul

    It is short, but there is no limit to love. this poem may be short and some may think it's stupid, but u can't put a vote on peoples feelings. i hope ur feeling and promise last forever

  • 17 years ago

    by the love of another fills my soul

    It is short, but there is no limit to love. this poem may be short and some may think it's stupid, but u can't put a vote on peoples feelings. i hope ur feeling and promise last forever

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