BEAUTIFUL piece of poetry. I'm usually one for leaving deep, thought-out comments, but I'm pretty much at a loss for words right now, but I'll do my best.

I loved how you ripped the hearts of your audience out in the first line with an emotion-filled "you told me..." and it sets up for the rest of the poem nicely. You kept this mood up throughout the poem, with wors like 'stains' and 'despise' and 'die'. Lovely work.

5/5

As always~ Kate