Comments : My dream

  • 17 years ago

    by WriteLoveOnHerArms

    Wow very beautifully written. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    But tears are still falling,
    shining like little stars.
    That's got to be my favorite line, but I also love the last line, the praying for a blessing from above. These lines express a lot of emotion and bolden the poem, making it stronger. Love it! Once in a while the rhymes seemed a little forced, but other then that perfect! Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Aww I found this poem to be sad.. very beautifully written though 5/5 xx