She is not her, or maybe she never was anything. An honest delusion,
Wonders arise for me, thinking her niceness was only an illusion

[[I really liked those lines.]]

This was a great poem. And it reminded me of something my ex-best friend said to me awhile ago. I thought your choice of wording was fantastic aswell. It was a great write overall. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I like the same lines as natalie, samm this is awesome!!! it did remind me of something xoxo i hope ya ok bub and talk soon xox

Great poem...makes me think alot

I like the imagery, BEAUTIFUL description

" an honest delusion"....... wow... i love that line.... very well put together.... it flows very nicely...and it is very step by step theres no tangents or scattered thoughts yet its still descriptive enough to paint a picture and then at the same time leaves the question of what actually happened.... excellent job