Wow i really like this one! I like the flow of the poem its really good!

I didnt really like this poem, it seemed like your thoughts were all over the place, mayeb you should try to organize you thoughts a bit more, because Im sure this poem has potential.

--steph

This is good but I feel if you split it into more, equal stanzas the flow would be better. Other than that it's good, I like the emotion in it. Well done,
- Polly

I like this poem. I honestly think age doesn't matter if you love someone but anyway. I loved it. Deserves a five. Great work.

Good job, try to expand your vocab and recheck your spelling, your should be you're in the second line. Keep it up

I didnt really like this poem, i think this poem has potential tho! Maybe if you organized a bit more, expanded your vocab and rechecked your spelling. I have to give this a 4/5!!