Awwah wow.. so powerful and emotional.. great write,.. i could really feel this characters emotion.. keep it up....please read and comment on my poems.. thanks.. Kirsty Palmer xx

A powerful poem. Despite the slight lack of tremendous detail, the flow of the poem and what it consisted was excellent. The language you confidently used was effective and the use of repetition was helpful within the piece. Very well done and keep writing =].

God bless,
-Elysium.

Wow amazing poem.. i really like it. it has alot of emotion put in it. its very deep and sad tho.. but i can relate to this. so yea.. ne ways great poem. i lvoe it. keep on writing. if u ever wana talk jus email me k..
take care
luve angie

I know exactly what your saying this poem. I go through the same thing every day of my life. Stay strong for me.

Another excellent job.