A bit rocky on the flow, but an amazing write nonetheless. I feel like this a lot of the time, I can really relate. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex

This is a really good poem.I know how that kinda hate feels.~-ericamayb~-

This was an excellent poem. i really felt what your poem protrays:) great job girl! keep it up
thanks for your comment on mine:)
latea..peace!
-~-Sarah

Nice job, I liked the "bull" part. You can try shortening the lines more. Keep it up!

Thanks for your comment

Good write i like it.

Liked a lot but thought it was a it sad!! Although it is in the sad section!! oops!! but found it like REALLY deperssing!!! but liked it anyway!!

An interesting style. It has never occurred to me to write a rhyming-prose-style type of poem.

You learn something new every day...be it medicines or poem-writing :p

Hey!

this is an awesome poem..
so much energy and emotion
loved the choice of words especially
" Hate hit's inside my body, it's pumping through my veins"

wonderful and very inspiring!

wuld love some advice on a few of my poems!

from ur pal
sophie :)

Damn, i like this..esp the part abt the bull seein red...very original

Oooh very nice...i like it

Its very well written. Of course, something so many others have felt once before, which makes it good.