Oh my god this poem is soooooo powerful i absolutely adored it this is amazing im speechless it really good :):):):):O

please could you comment on my poems i like to know what people think of my writing thnx xxx alex xxx

Aww that was cute but sorta sad cause it was only a dream

Very nice good choice of words the end sentence came so quick though as if something must go before it to give more power and rhyme but nice job
really I read the rest I like this one the most...

That was really good I really liked it. It was sweet

I really like this poem, you can picture everything! i also like the way that it's a dream at the end! keep writing :) xx

That was a strange poem lol but i liked it.
The best part to me was the ending, it was sweet.
well i like your poems...
hope u check out more of mine sometime.
well love ya bye!

WOW, and mine was good??lol. your flow on this one is incredible, i absolutely love it. 5/5

I'm not a lovey-dovey person but it was cute and well written. 5/5
Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

I like this poem of yours my dear.. it's some kinda new. it's my first time to read such poem. it's unique huh!
keep it up!!!

That was so good your a really good writer and u should keep up the good work well done x x

Wow loved it the flow was perfect and i felt like i was living it trully art... BRAVO!!!

Wow this poem is amazing, I love it. It is so cute yet powerful. Keep up the good work!

Relllly great poem!

I soo love ur peom thnx 4 wpt u sed bwt mine
xxx emmaxxx

THis is great. I love it.

Damn....that was hot
like no joke i actually got turned on
haha
werid huh.....omfg imma read some more
I love your writing would it be werid if i added you to my faveorites
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