I absolutely LOVE your poem. Don't die though :] People will miss you.

Omg.. plz dont die, becuz then you wont be able to fix all ur problems.. ppl want to help.. and ppl will if you ask, and if they care, which they will.. if you ever need to talk.. im here.. keep up all you have.. dont drop

-x-great poem expressing how you feel, i could tell that you had some regret in ur writing, but u got through it, dont ever give up-x-

Angie,

That
Was
Beautiful

Luv Niquee
xoxoxoxox

Please angie dont do it please we can get threw tis together

Wow
Me and you
have the same style
of poetry
i loved it
Great job
sad
But it was Greatly written
5/5
~MF~

Thanks for the comment on my poem. This poem is amazingly beautiful and full of pain and sorrow at the same time.I know exactly what you are feeling. I started cutting when i was 11 i din't even know why but it releases something deep inside of you. I understand your pain but even tho I've attempted suicide more times then I'd like to remeber you gotta think ahead you never know what may happen next. You never know who you may inspire. Good luck.

Raychel

This is amazing,, i love your poems they are great.. and same to you if u ever wanna talk i'm just an e-mail away

Hey great poem, it really well written
love m el

Thank you for the comment on my poem. I know how you feel but it will get better.

Hey this is really good..I relate to it..but No one wants you to die..I have learned that many times..It's really good tho..you have talent..

I like this poem.. A lot.. I especially like this part.. "You will go on with your life
You will forget I was even here
I took my life with this pretty knife
Please dont shed any tears" And particuarly I like " I took my life with this pretty knife"

On the other hand I agree with everyoen.. Don't do something like that.. Trust me.. It gets better eventually...If you ever want to talk you can email me at plzd_2_tease@yahoo.com..

I did enjoy the poem though :)

Ariana

Don't die. u have so much in life thats going to get better. plz don't die. this poem remnded me of the way i felt not too long ago. ur such a beautiful writter adn a beautiful person. u fill ur poems with so much emotion. it's truely beautiful the gift u posess. (i can't spell by the way. lol) thanx fot the comment too. i calle dit Don't Cry. like u said too. keep up the good writting.
love always Willow xxoo

This is an amazing poem. it's overflowing with emotion and it's completely relatable. i loved it.
and thank you for the comment on my poem it means a lot to me.

-rachel

Aww. That was awesome! I loved the emotion you put to this piece.. nice work, truly.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5

One word to describe the feeling and talent it took to write this. Amazing!. well done. a 5 for you nd thank you so so much for your kind comment on my own poetry. Take care. Ayesha

Awesome job. I like this poem. It has a lot of emotion to it.

And thanks for the comment. I'm glad someone cam relate to it too.

I loved it. Alot of emotion went into it. 5/5

Luvv the poemm..but you can't die!=( Noo! Cause Chelss will miss you!=( Luvves you lotss! XxXoOo -Chels-

Omg...i would so0o0 cry but i'd smear my mascara.
that was absolutly beautiful...it was like...WOW..not wow...but WOW lmao
~sarah~

This is a great poem i really like it.