Hmmm..very interesting...this is pretty unique..all this time i thought you were writting about a person..but wow..an unexpected twist...i liked it!!!Not ur best work but definatly a good peice:):)

THis is a very nice poem. Really easy to read and a nice flow to it! Keep up the good work!

Wow, i dont know what to say... That poem was awesome and actually i didnt expect it to end that way; but i loved it! I had to read it twice to realize that everything made sense, because in the first place i thought you were writing about a boy...lol. I loved it! Keep writing!
Love,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Sometimes I feel like you are gone
Sometimes I feel like I'm all alone
You're hurting me now as we speak
You're twisting and knotting and making me weak

^^I really really really liked that stanza. wow. I can relate soooo much in that one!

Again, you expressed yourself very well. I liked this alot. Cause the way you wrote it, readers are able to interpreate{sp?} it however they like..whether it's about a b/f or family passing..They're able to relate in some way. It's great! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Like this poem too =]