Awwah this is really cute, and i hope that this character does find love! great write, keep it up! 5/5.. please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx

This was a poem which rhymed nicely, and had good content.

However, perhaps you should consider changing the second "too" to something else. I also found the story a little fast.

Of course, it's lovely as is, as is evident by the high score it's receiving, and the fact that comment person above me placed it at 5/5. These are just my thoughts on improving it further...