Wow.. such a sweet, yet sad poem, sweet because it was beautifuly writen but sad taht it was never really true! i loved the last sanza! great ending! keep writing, please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx

Thats a really good poem....
i likes alot...
good job hope ya keep it up!
well hope to see some comments from ya
thanks love ya bye!

It had great flow .. .. .. to be able to bring beauty though words is gift not many posses .. .. ..