Lol i liked this poem.. real feel good factor about it! great write... made me chuckle! lol..please read and comment on my poems, thanks... Kirsty Palmer xx

Okay. well...this isnt a toungue twister..i understood every word. which im pretty sure means...its not a toungue twister

Hmm.if i sounded like i was being..a really big snob. i really didnt mean to come across like that. SORRY !! maybe you could of put it in other? i dno. well, it wasnt that bad. i understand if you dont like my poems. its your opinion.

Ooh not other. i ment miscellaneous

Kinda choppy hard to follow

Lol nice