Comments : Im not alright

  • 17 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Im going thro this too........
    being overprtected and watched every moment of your life...
    i hate that feeling.
    hope ur problem gets better.
    poem is a 5/5
    -steph

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    "and i don't want to live my life
    hiding and pretending I'm just fine"

    I find that two lines powerful. well done

    To be honest I feel the same way.. but not exactly.. I dont't want to pretend I don't love my ex.. er.. anyway it was a great poem. well done! keep up the good work 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow i can honestly say i liked this one it was very very good. It showed that u put ur emoption into it ( i gues ur supposed to do that) lol. but i could tell u put some thought and lots of meaning to it. it was very good.
    5/5 always
    Kate~