Wow.. what an amazing write! .. this is so powerful, and sad, i can feel the emotion in this character, you really were ablel to create an image in my head just from those wrods! well done! 5/5..please read and comment on my poems, thank you .. kirsty palmer xx

Aww, that's so sad, yet so in depth with yourself and your surroundings. I'm proud to read this Krystal, it shows that you truly see what goes on around you and you see how it affects you. Hope life in Alberta is better, love ya sis. <3