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by struggling   Aug 2, 2006


You were only 18 u had your whole life ahead of you.
I can still remember when we could barely tie our shoe.
And remember how everyone picked on you cuz u were friends with a girl.
But you would say so what i love her she is my world.
We were best friends and u told me someday i would be your wife.
Cuz i was the only girl u loved in your life.
I never took u seriously cuz we were on eight.
We used to have tea parties and u promised me someday u will take me on a date.
When we got older u asked me to be your wife again.
But this time u had a ring and promised u would love me until the end.

July 16th was the day we set so we can become one.
But the day before our wedding your life was over and done.
Where did that bullet come from no one knew.
But i damn sure wish i did so i could kill them like they killed u.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Wow wasn't expecting that, that was awesome, really good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Silver

    Aww, this was really really sad. But still really really good. I liked it ALOT. You're a really good writer. Oh, and I'll try my best in posting more poems soon, lol. Keep it up hun.
    --Silver

  • 17 years ago

    by aknives sweet kiss

    Awww that sad Im always here for you
    Love Avril xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by sweet_tears

    Wow this is sad but awesome it actually brought a tear to my eye.I Love It.5/5 poem.