Wow.. such a sad and powerful poem, you wrote it so well, and it flowed perfectly, the ryhming was great, and added fear to the poem, great write keep it up 5/5..please read and comment on my poems.. thank you... kirsty palmer xx

Gr8 poem...i like it:)

Wow thats really amazing... the rhyming is perfect! ^^ xxx

I really like this one. The rhyme scheme is really good & unforced. Great work, I'll be sure and read more of your poems =)

x.xBrokenx.x

Wow words cannot express how well this poem is. i really like the way it flows together.
great job!
aunabeth