Beautiful.The flow was perfect the vocab was great. I loved the heartfelt expression.
5/5

Beautiful. Expressive, and conjuring of a pretty picture in the minds eye. Well done. xx

Wow confusing! I might try it out if i ever actually understand it. Very interesting and I think you can write better but it is a good job for a very constricting form.

Great poem very unique and the flow was nice and peaceful.............great job!!

-AnnMarie

Beautiful and so unique. I love the many different styles you use. It shows the great potential and talent you have in writing. Never stop hun! 5/5