Nice, theres a lot of emotion in this poem..
keep it up! 5/5

The YOU over and over makes in condeming..i lvoe it..each line u use it grows more and mroe intnese..whcih i feel s what u were goin for. I lvoe youyr work i will deff. read more later..ur in ym favs hunn.

keep it up your stuff is a masterpiece!

lissa