It's really a dark poem. Good imagination...

I actually totally love this and was really swallowed with it, excelent i especially love this line

My blackened heart a slave to sin

WELL DONE!

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Wwowooahh.. great poem, very dark, and well written! i really loved it, you are really talented.. keep writting!..please read and comment on my poems, thank you .. kirsty palmer xx

Wwowooahh.. great poem, very dark, and well written! i really loved it, you are really talented.. keep writting!..please read and comment on my poems, thank you .. kirsty palmer xx

Omg i loved this poem it was fabulous...and u write the wording almost perfect nice job keep writing!

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

Your poem was relli good and very well written! you are an amazing poet, keep it up!!

Great poem...mind giving me some tips for me to improve??