Great poem.keep it up yout a good writer.

much luv,
Jubilee

I like the message that this sends across. nice

Very wise words that I had to learn the hard way =p It will slowly kill you from the inside out =(
Fantasticly done and I like the flow that all your poems seem to have =) Truly great =D 5/5
Rhea

You were one of my favorite writers on her now you ARE my favorite writer on here you are a wonderful writer great job