Oh its sad...sorry you feel like this...thanks for the comment....if you ever want 2 talk...im here and happy 2 listen..xoxox..send me a msg if u ever want 2 talk or jus ask me 4 my msn address

Wow.. such a sad and powerful poem.. well written, i could feel the pain and anger inside this character...i hope it isnt true.. if it is..wanna talk..im a gd listener...just a few helpfull feedbacks (not crituiques!!);
in the llast stanza and the 2nd line you have written 'away' twice.. and in the same stanze..last line.. you wrote 'than'..is it suppoesed to be 'then?' take care and keep writting..please read and comment on mine.. thank you ..kirsty palmer xx