Comments : Bad Fish No More

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    The creativity in this piece is just amazing Bill.

    Swim with me through this life
    Smiling and laughing along the way
    I am not the bad fish I used to be
    Your love has set that fish free
    ^^
    What a wonderful stanza, it really proves that love conquers all .....
    Great write, my friend !

  • Once again another great poem..u chose ur word from ur heart and to the heart it touches. a great poem..

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    I have to admit I was a little puzzled by the title, but now that I've read it I must say that I absolutely love it. It's beautiful, Bill. Positively beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Again, awesome, have you considered a book , Bill. Your talent for setting the scene. mood place, time is remarkable. Loretta