Really sad i like it alot and a great story. 5-5

tabby

I cried when i read this one. It gave me goosebumps. I am so sorry about your loss. It must be really hard working with kids and getting attached and then having to let go. You have to be a very strong person, my respect goes out to you. I am sure he is in a place we cannot imagine. You will see him again.

peace & love-chelsea

Wow your poem is actually amazing!!! that's all i have to say!

Wow. this poem was really touching and powerful. These kinds of poems open peoples eyes to the truth of the world. i also loved the rhyming.

Woh, such a powerful, deeply sad poem.. this made me cry, it's always sad when people get taken from you unexpectedly, but a childs life always has that extra edge.. excellent! 5/5 xx

Awh, wow. it was really good. thank you so much for your comments they mean alot to me. The best thing someone can do is just take the time out to apreatiate something that I've written from my heart.Your write i did like it. You are a great writer and your going under my favorites.

Thanks for saying all those great things. the people on here are the only people to hear/read all that i write. it means alot. i can't say thank you enough.

5/5

Much love
Amberinaa*

Yeah you have been were I am i just have delt with alot and my son is now happy bc he has a guy in his life! thank you for your comments and I luv ya take care

Omg this poem made me cry and cry i'm still cry i can't see the letters that i type...your amazing at writting...you seem so strong i wish i had that i really wish i did

I feel you... you are right.. we share a like... loved the story.. hated the out come, we learn to live and hopefully live to learn.

Long, but it was worth the read, 5/5 "grand" poem. I used a new word instead of great or good :)

Omg.. it made me cry.. so, sorry, hon.. why did he die? who killed him? awww.... poor kid!

I aint even gunna front this poem made me cry i've had the most important people taken away from me n now me n my sister are the only ones left with my neices n nephew this world is so crewl