So Sweet

by Joanne   Aug 4, 2006


So sweet love seemed that april morn
when first we kissed beside the thorn
so strangely sweet it was not strange
we thought that love could never change
but i can tell let truth be told
that love will change in growing old
though day by day is naught to see
so delicate his motions be

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  • 19 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Where you put 'but i can tell' after that you should put i can tell YOU let THE truth be told that will help it fit into the rhythm jus a suggestion lol nicep oem though :):):)

    Please would you comment on some of my poems i like as much feedback as poss thnx XxX AlEx XxX