Thats was a perfect poem
good job keep it up 5/5
please comment ma poems and tell me what ya think

Sweet poem xx

AAAAAWWWWWWWW that was sooo sweet! i have commented like all of your poems cuz evry poem i read i want to read more and more lol...but yeh your a great writer and poet and i love your work and i cant wait to read more from you and im very sorry to say this but im adding you to my favs list thts cuz of your work and it aint easy going on my favs list..lol but yeh love your work!
keep it up and keep writing AND
keep smiling like this>>> :) lol im weird

Much Love
TORMENTED